Sagure

I have been holding off posting these, but I would like some possible advice on the character design and if it suites the characters. A pic of the basic design for Sagure, bio is as follows.

Name: Sagure (Sa-gur-y, accent in the middle)
Occupation : Adventurer
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Hair colour: Red-Orange
Eye colour: Green with no pupil, though there are still whites.
Hight: 5'7
Build: Lean, Athletic
Place of Birth:
Likes: Order, Earned Respect,
Dislikes: Drunkards, People who assume she got where she is due to her fathers money rather than her own skill.
Goals: To show people that she is not a spoiled pampered brat. To make her own money and not rely on her fathers wealth. To be as skilled as she can become in her chosen profession. Physical Description: She has a pair of ridged horns that meet above her nose and spread out and upwards. Her hair is red orange and kept short to be out of the way. Her eyes are green and have no pupils. She has a mostly human shaped body, but the devilish blood in her veins also gives her unguligrade hoofed feet (think horse) and a thick tail with a fringed fin at the end. Her skin is slightly reddish, more so on her back than the rest of her.
Personality: She gives respect where she thinks it is due, and is driven when she thinks people don't give her enough. She has a need to prove people wrong.
History: She grew up among her fathers trade caravan. The people she found most interesting were the caravan guards. When she was old enough she asked her father if she could attend the military school in Albion. She did want a military career, though things didn't quite turn out that way.
Favoured weapon: Sword and Shield.